For my essay I am going to use pictures to assist my essay in visual communications and spatial communication by arranging my essay in a certain way. I want to arrange it around my ideas so that the pictures will give the reader a better understanding of my quotes and explanation of my quotes. I hope to use the citation suggestions used in my previous essay to better format this essay. I also plan on using hyperlinks.
To plan my essay, I will begin by talking about my own definition of beauty. my intro will lead into my thesis, and for my first paragraph I will reflect on my definition, and what it means to me. I hope use find pictures, links, or both to further support my argument. in my second paragraph, i plan to use Armstrong’s arguments to support my thesis. for my third paragraph im going to use a naysayer paragraph and talk about why my argument would trump another argument. I would then include other paragraphs that support my essay, discuss what society’s definition of beauty is, and what should change about it. I would then conclude my essay.
Nice outline, I like the idea about the pictures merged with the writing. That will make it a lot more interesting to read if there are a bunch of visuals that are working well with what you are saying.
This looks like a strong outline for your essay and I like the order in which you have planned to present your topic’s to the reader.
Using pictures should definitely assist you in describing your main points to your reader. I also like how you plan to use your own definition of beauty, and explain how it connects to your thesis. Overall, I think that your outline is solid, and that there is a lot of material to cover within the subjects that you’ve chosen. That should help with reaching the word count.