The images above show the writing strategies applied to my essay from chapter 12 in they say I say. The red highlights are phrases that I have repeated often which are “both sides of the brain”, “potential”, and “approach.” This has shown me that i can either substitute these for different words or phrases at times or change them all together. The blue highlight is the use of key terms such as brain, science, and art. Seeing the use of these key terms in every paragraph of my paper shows that I keep on top of my idea for the paper and don’t stray off topic. The pink highlights are for good transitions in the paper. I have these in every paragraph, and I’m satisfied with how many I have in the paper.