Commenting on Eric’s paper i said, “This is a great idea to bring into the paper. Single photos can often provide plenty of morale to world movements making it very influencial”. this is an idea comment because I thought it was a good thought to talk about photos and their impact on art.

On Taylor’s paper I commented, “This makes the reader feel like they can relate more to the essay because it describes the communities these painters are changing.” Here she added a detailed background of Haas and Hahn which allowed the reader to connected well to the writer and the artists. I found the organization of this section being right after the intro to be a good spot for it. In Taylor’s intro paragraph I commented, “I like the comparison here between both artists”. laid out evidence for their different personalities and I enjoyed the comparison between them.
Prioritizing global edits over local edits is a little harder because its more about critiquing the person’s idea’s and not simple grammatical errors. local edits are much easier because those always been how I’ve peer reviewed papers.